12:25 : I walk to lunch with my
friends, and sit down at the picnic tables on the patio. I grab my food to heat
up, and walk inside to the microwave.
12:35 : Most people are done
eating, except for the people with popcorn, and dessert. I throw away my trash
and walk back to my table were all my friends are.
12:45 : Everyone heads out to recess.
Me and my friends all go to the field, and start walking around the gravel
path.
12:55 : We’re all bored. Walking in
a circle talking about the same show over and over.
1:00 : Everyone starts to talk
about how cold or hot they are, we all want to sit down but don’t admit
it. We want
to go inside, and be done with recess, but no one wants to go to math.
1:15 : We make our final lap and
start to walk inside.
I liked the format of your slice of life. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI liked how it was formatted. And how well you described lunch.
ReplyDeleteIt was interesting how you used time to tell your story. What a great idea.
ReplyDeleteGood idea. You did a good job because this is basically how I see our lunch. :) ;)
ReplyDeleteGood idea. You did a good job because this is basically how I see our lunch. :) ;)
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote this. Its a cool thing to write about, this is exactly how I see everything! :)
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